I miss the way you stare,
I so miss your face.
I long for your touch
or my hair, the way you trace...
The way you hold me close,
Never let my hand go,
Surprise me from behind
The numerous kisses you blow...
Dreaming about the future,
Lying beside me in bed,
Eyes set on each other,
Understanding the unsaid...
Sitting under the dark sky,
On a cool breezy night,
In each others embrace
Enjoying the starry sight...
I so miss the gone days
When you were only mine...
I so miss being with you
Just you, all the time..!
15 comments:
Woaaahh !! Nice !!
How do you think all this ??
Waise what do you call it ??
A Poem ??
Brilliant work!....the 'Unknown me' is even more insightful!..love the title of the blog as well!
Thank you so much Ron...! :D
thumbs up! good going...
Thnx Anonymous Saba..! :) :p
Hey Vrinda
Nice attempt. Soothing is the wrd fr yr poetry.
I would say yr blog is giving positive vibes.
All the best
Kp Writing......
Appreciation is what inspires me to write ..! :)
Thank you soo much Pankul..!!!
its very free flowing...infact very serene nd insightful and have a lot of a calming influence on an individual :)nice work
Thnk you soo muh Aditya..!!!
Finally a compliment from you..! :D
that's the way to go girl.keep writing ! love n best wishes ! :)
Thnk you soo much..!!!
Kal raat janay kia hua,
Kuch dair pehlay neend say
Kuch ashk milnay aa gai
Kuch khwab bhee tootay huay
Kuch loog bhee bhoolay huay
Kuch rastay bhatkay huay
Kuch gerd main liptee hueeN
Kuch bay-tarah phaili hueeN
Kuch khaul main simti hueeN
Bairabt C soochain kai
Bhooli huee batain kai
Ik shaks kee yadain kai
Phir dair tak jaga raha
Sochoon main gum baitha rah...
Ik shaks kee yadain kai...
I jus love this line..! :)
hey goood work keep it up
Thnx a lot..! :)
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